Something Creative

green lit with crimson sparks/smokeless fire creeps through forests/summer’s fiery demise

I am trying a new form here…not sure if it works or not.  Have been reading a lot of haiku on Twitter & I have always enjoyed reading it.  However I’m not certain it is the best form for me.  Yet an experiment is never bad & may be what helps me decide if I shall continue to write or if I (and everyone else) will be better off stopping.  Please feel free to comment–feedback is necessary & welcome.  If you flame me I will bring in my big guns & have you eliminated….just saying.